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Wednesday 23 March 2016

My end of Term 1 writing sample. Find out why I gave myself 23 points.

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  1. Choice Story chase ...your Kai sounded very yum.

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  2. Kia Ora Chace,
    Thanks for sharing your story. I especially like how you have been able to give yourself a score and the let us know the reasons for your score. Sounds like the Gala day was heaps of fun with plenty of delicious food to try. What was it about the candy floss that you didn't like? I think it is toooooo sweet! How did the cake that looked like a doughnut taste? I have never seen a white parrot! Do you know why it was white?
    Keep up the fabulous work sharing your learning on your blog.
    Tania

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