Thursday, 21 September 2017

Here is my problem solving DLO.

I liked that I got all the questions done.
Something I found hard was the question on slide 3.
My next step is to put an explanation about all of it.

Tuesday, 5 September 2017

Do you know children are working today?

In class I had to write a recount from the perspective (view) of a child working in a sweatshop. I chose to be a kid working in a Acer factory

I was learning to proof-read our work to improve the accuracy of our complex punctuation.

To be successful I will:
Carefully read it to check each sentences makes sense
Use speech marks at the beginning and ending of direct speech and have punctuation within in

Carefully read it to check each sentence begins with a capital letter and end with either a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark

Add detail to parts that need it

Hope you enjoy my story.

On one dark morning in China my buzzer went off and I said, “Come on I’m still tired.” It was 4:00 and I had to get ready for work. Hi I am Crag. I was in China walking to the Acer sweat shop. When I got there the boss (Benson) yelled ,“You are late! Get to your station!” “Ok” I quiverd. I went to my station and started putting the parts together.

Hours later. Beep! Went the bell. It was time for lunch. “At least I could have a break,” I said. All I had was a bowl of dirty rice. Minutes later beep! The bell went again. “But I haven't eaten anything yet,” I said. Then I quickly gobbled up the rice and went back to work. I was able to smell the fumes, I couldn't stand them but I still had to work.

Minutes later Bang! “What was that?” I said. I had a look Yan had fainted. “Yan get up it’s not time to sleep!’’ Benson yelled, “Does Benson really think Yan just fell asleep?” I thought. “Everyone just keep working nothing to see here” the boss demanded. I always find the boss to be mean. I was still able to smell all the toxic fumes.“I wish I had a job that doesn’t include toxins” I moaned. At that moment, Beeep! The bell went yay it was finally 8:00 I can now go home. On my way back home I was thinking of another job to do. THE END.

Monday, 4 September 2017


Here are some questions and answers about business.

I learnt a few new words like budget, income, ongoing costs and start up costs . (They are on the last slide)
I like how many words I learnt.
Something I found hard was finding the answers to my questions.
My next step is finding out more questions to answer.